Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

Immortal Beloved

My immortal beloved
dusk and thick as night
your dark skin and rolling curls
I have sought for centuries...

The flood from your candid form
flows like a river
my eternal beloved
I feel your past pain of mortality..

I sense the warmth and current
of your deep red blood
I hurl and skew my kisses
like crimson roses of fire...

Your hands touch me
light and cold
sending a shiver through me
we shine with the glory of Luna...

Gift me with your lunar smile
your irises, sullen and chaotic
they flash when they hear my sigh
soaring from deep within my gut...

yes, you my shadow woman
bend your head of black hair
just slightly to one side
drink my blood, heart of hearts...

I will give you everything
and while i'm in agony
you, my love of all loves
draw sustenance from my burning blood...

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Gerald Kithinji November 21, 2013 at 3:06 PM Glory of Luna--- gloire de Lune? Perhaps. Intoxicating! Ken Carroll November 21, 2013 at 4:54 PM thank you Gerald! Ken

Lucilla Carrillo October 19, 2013 at 2:45 AM WOW! You are one romantic man. Don't change. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Ken Carroll October 19, 2013 at 4:29 AM Hi Lucilla, Thank you for your kindest comment.. Ken

Kelly Deschler October 18, 2013 at 9:14 PM This is a very romantic gothic poem, Ken! Very captivating and enchanting! I loved it!...Thank you so much for the kind comments. Ken Carroll October 18, 2013 at 10:21 PM Thank you Kelly, you are most kind.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid October 18, 2013 at 3:43 PM penned really beautiful dear friend Ken Carroll October 18, 2013 at 3:58 PM Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for the visit.. Ken

Len Gasun October 18, 2013 at 2:39 AM A very beautiful Halloween poem, I've enjoyed reading this afternoon my dear friend Ken. Kudos! Thank you so much also for sharing. So love it and enjoyed! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Ken Carroll October 18, 2013 at 4:15 AM Hi Leonora, Thank you for stopping by, always appreciated.. Ken

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2013 at 7:47 AM Great Halloween work that grabs the audience and draws them into a surprise ending..If for a contest, should be in the winners' list in my book..Thanks for the review of my work..I hope that this will be a great day for you..Sara Ken Carroll October 17, 2013 at 8:51 AM Hey Sara, Thanks for reviewing my verse.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2013 at 4:30 AM - Ken, you are really romantic ..... - So tender and loving words .... I must admit that I'm melting!! - Beautiful!! - Just continue .... - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ken Carroll October 17, 2013 at 5:48 AM Hi Anne, Than you for such a lovely visit.. Ken

Laura Breidenthal October 17, 2013 at 1:57 AM Quite a remarkable piece you composed. I am very impressed! :) Awesome work, and thanks for your gracious visits. Always, Laura Ken Carroll October 17, 2013 at 5:48 AM Hi Laura, Thank you for stopping by as well.. Ken

Joseph Matose October 17, 2013 at 1:13 AM Ken!! This is a scorcher. You write so touching LOVE Poetry. This is awesome. Keep up the serenade! Friend JM Ken Carroll October 17, 2013 at 5:47 AM Hi Joseph, Thank you for the most kind visit my friend.. Ken

Nette Onclaud October 17, 2013 at 12:01 AM "you set my soul on fire", ken... a most passionate composition subtly embracing a moment mysteriously eerie!.. wow.. :) huggs Ken Carroll October 17, 2013 at 12:43 AM Hi Nette, Thank you for the lovely comment.. Ken