Immortal

I scribble these words of apathy onto a bleak canvas.

I right my sins before I jump into this ocean of knives.

 

I wish i could be frugal with a mere nine lives.

But i live in agony for i cannot die.

 

My eyes scan lone cemetery's in remorse.

This impeding life takes most by force.

But not I...

 

Bright light and streets of gold are faint dreams for a life so utterly cold.

There is no helping a severed soul.

 

I shall throw myself  at any sort...

Because life for me will never be lived in fear of being cut short.

 

No tears can escape my windows, No sounds can caress my ears.

No laughter will be heard for many years..

 

I watch flocks of birds disappear into an orange horizon.I observe nature and love..

I await my chance to be part of the heavens above.

 

Sadly i am only a beast without fate, an immortal soul devastated by hate...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/7/2011 9:07:00 PM
Roxanna,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d.
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Date: 5/4/2011 9:53:00 PM
Dear Roxanna It's a privilege to read your poems they are so nice! Thank you so much for sharing
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Date: 5/2/2011 6:08:00 AM
Roxanna, the site owners pick poems Sundays to be put on a featured list , usually around 48 poems. You are featured for a whole week. The list is changed around each day giving your poetry more exposure. You can find the list in the center of the main page. You click on the numbers to go from page to page. Hope you enjoy reading and commenting on some of the other poets who are featured this week with you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Roxanna. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congrats Roxanna on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 5/2/2011 5:35:00 AM
Thanks carol (:
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations Roxanna on your win in Jimmy's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 3:51:00 PM
What does it mean if it's featured.
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Date: 5/1/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Roxanna
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:27:00 PM
This is one of the best poems ever , like it.
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:21:00 AM
thank you (:
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:18:00 AM
Awesome, Roxanna, if one never died, what a punishment that would be, but i do like this poem, it is different, such profoundness. Harry
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Date: 4/7/2011 7:33:00 AM
thanks(: and yes debbie my Line scheme is unique i don't like to always use regular couplets or the same ol' same oh. But thanks(:
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Date: 4/7/2011 4:14:00 AM
Wow - now that's deep, glad I stopped by to read it.
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Date: 4/6/2011 2:06:00 PM
such a talented poet! very original..the line layout is distracting though? So glad to have read yours today! Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:43:00 AM
aww thanks everyone (:
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:35:00 AM
I stopped by to read some more of your poetry today Roxanna. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 7:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight with a powerful theme.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... our contests are free to enter so please check them out and good luck with luv..
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:38:00 PM
Awww well i believe that is the best comment i have recieved Wiseton (: I really enjoyed ur stuff and I hope that your story is a hit. Maybe down the road you would let me have the honors of reading it(: good luck and thank you so much
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Date: 4/5/2011 12:32:00 PM
Roxxie you ROCK!!! I love this poem so much, n i am in the middle of penning a novel about a vampire (a good one - in fact a writer) and it is titled THE S-FACTOR. ur write has just inspired me more hence i hope 2 enrich my protagonist's life from this perspective at some juncture in the plot. b.t.w. i notice u r new in PS n i would lyk 2 welcome u, n also say thanx 4 ur awesome comments on my stuff. glad u enjoyed
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:53:00 AM
That means sooo much to me (:
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:35:00 AM
Straight powerful. Holy damn.
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