Immoral Bright

The sun which is forever bright,
And 
The moon which is forever basking,
In its silvery light.
Are beginning fade away by,
Immoral which are forever growing brighter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 17, 2010 at 5:56 PM
the moon is dependent on the sun just like us.
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