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Immediate Cause

PART 1. Morphine intoxication PART 2. Coronary artery atherosclerosis, sleep apnea 28a. ACCIDENT 28b. June 8, 2008 28c. 17:35 28d. Ingested prescription medication 28f. Home

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Stephen Kilmer

Date: 8/21/2013 7:01:00 PM

Thanks lori for your kindness. I am not a complete head case either... 90% or so... :) Anyway I'll be reading and commenting as time carries on. Kilmer

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 8/21/2013 4:47:00 PM

Well I guess I pull my foot out of my mouth now. I am sorry to hear the news of your ex-husband. I apologize if I offended you. sincerely, Kilmer

Lori Hopkins
Date: 8/21/2013 6:44:00 PM

please trust there was no offence taken. i understand placing the writer as the subject is quite common. and so now you know i write from all POV's too ;) just wanted you to know i am not a complete head case, and am looking forward to more correspondence. ~lori

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 8/20/2013 8:17:00 PM

Sound like you have a lot of me issues. Perhaps you need to write them out. Comfortably numb...I think not. Kilmer

Lori Hopkins
Date: 8/21/2013 8:28:00 AM

normally i don't reveal too much about my writes as i like the reader to experience as they will, however in this case; this is just a quip/drawup from the death report for my ex-husband, ordered from the state as it was the state who reported to me he was deceased. who was somewhat estranged from myself and his two daughters we share. and yes, i write A LOT. ~lori

Lori Hopkins
Date: 8/20/2013 8:22:00 PM

indeed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2013 2:22:00 PM

Hi Lori, ha this is an interesting case, sometimes we are in the ER ..over a little indigestion (ME).. I'm hoping this case, feels much better now.. always~ Linda