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Immediate Cause

PART 1.
Morphine intoxication

PART 2.
Coronary artery atherosclerosis, sleep apnea

28a. 
ACCIDENT

28b. 
June 8, 2008

28c. 
17:35

28d.
Ingested prescription medication

28f.
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Stephen Kilmer

August 21, 2013 at 7:01 PM

Thanks lori for your kindness. I am not a complete head case either... 90% or so... :) Anyway I'll be reading and commenting as time carries on. Kilmer

Stephen Kilmer

August 21, 2013 at 4:47 PM

Well I guess I pull my foot out of my mouth now. I am sorry to hear the news of your ex-husband. I apologize if I offended you. sincerely, Kilmer

Lori Hopkins

August 21, 2013 at 6:44 PM

please trust there was no offence taken. i understand placing the writer as the subject is quite common. and so now you know i write from all POV's too ;) just wanted you to know i am not a complete head case, and am looking forward to more correspondence. ~lori

Stephen Kilmer

August 20, 2013 at 8:17 PM

Sound like you have a lot of me issues. Perhaps you need to write them out. Comfortably numb...I think not. Kilmer

Lori Hopkins

August 21, 2013 at 8:28 AM

normally i don't reveal too much about my writes as i like the reader to experience as they will, however in this case; this is just a quip/drawup from the death report for my ex-husband, ordered from the state as it was the state who reported to me he was deceased. who was somewhat estranged from myself and his two daughters we share. and yes, i write A LOT. ~lori

Lori Hopkins

August 20, 2013 at 8:22 PM

indeed.

Poet Destroyer A

August 18, 2013 at 2:22 PM

Hi Lori, ha this is an interesting case, sometimes we are in the ER ..over a little indigestion (ME).. I'm hoping this case, feels much better now.. always~ Linda

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