Immeasurable Impact

Roses are black and white, 

 and many hues between. 
 Violets are dying on this cemetery scene, 

 sunken in grief as they rest on gravestones, 
 still as the dirt that covers cold bones. 

 Your body's rotting, concealed below, 
 yet your prints remain, and like seeds they grow 

 beyond my skin where they once landed, 
 into my heart, to others expanded. 

 Your immeasurable impact will always last 
 beyond the gone, unreachable past. 

 This sad, somber place completely fails 
 to capture all your full life entails. 

 A simple dash sums up your living years. 
 There's no form or voice in this silent place of tears. 

 Just a stone memento displays who we lack. 
 Only memories and time will bring you back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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George   Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 4:33 AM
STEEPED IN DEEP EMOTION. PROFOUND! Poetry at its finest. Congratulations on your top-notch win. Sincerely, Elaine
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. A touching sorrowful poem... a lot of truth there too.
Richards Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Nicely done Juliet! Congratulations on your high placement ! :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Wonderful write, Juliet. I love these two lines "A simple dash sums up your living years." and "Only memories and time will bring you back." Congrats on your podium finish.
Collins Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Dear Juliet - So much hidden in that simple dash. Into my favorites you now abide. lvoe, Kathy
Collins Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Dear Juliet - So much hidden in that simple dash. Into my favorites you now abide. lvoe, Kathy
Sirak Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Congrats on your win. Your poem is filled with a sense of loss.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 4:00 AM
many congrats on your top spot Juliet xx
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Juliet
Jones Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:59 PM
You captured the feeling of loss and pain and love..nicely done..congratulations on your win
A   Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Hi Juliet, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 2:41 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Puddifoot Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 6:40 AM
you've done a good job in capturing the palpable sense of loss here, and the subject is very much along the lines of my latest poem! a very apt entry for the contest; this should do well...
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 10:09 AM
grief-stricken lines so beaitufully expressed, juliet... well done!..:) huggs
Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 12:38 AM
Poignant tale filled with love.
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:45 PM
- A touching but still beautiful poem to Gail contest, Juliet. - Wishing you all luck! - (Welcome to read my for this contest) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:25 PM
I real sad one! I hope it's not real. Light & Love
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