Imbibe

I’m here with you and wanting you. You have to see that this is true. Look deep into these eyes of mine. Imbibe me like a cherry wine. My eyes of green are drinking in your eyes, your smile, your mocha skin. My eyes are stars that for you shine. Imbibe me like a cherry wine. Your mouth is beautiful to me. I think how sweet that it must be - like cherries ripened on the vine. Imbibe me like a cherry wine. Oh, kiss me now; I cannot wait to taste your lips. Don’t hesitate. I’ve given you now every sign. Imbibe me like a cherry wine.

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 1:19:00 PM

Andrea, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge I Words !

The Situation

Date: 7/14/2023 4:47:00 PM

The kind of material I'd expect back from those I write for. And for some reason It seems to be that season for me.

Terry Miller

Date: 7/7/2023 4:21:00 AM

Very romantic and a wonderful write, congratulations.

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/7/2023 3:48:00 AM

so sweet and tender. Congratulations.

John Read

Date: 7/7/2023 1:59:00 AM

Hi Andrea,that was beautiful full of love and emotion,one of the best I've read so far.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/7/2023 5:17:00 AM

Thanks so much

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2023 1:29:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs

J. Summers

Date: 7/6/2023 5:03:00 PM

Like this a lot, such an inviting tone, great imagery throughout and I liked the repetitive lines. John

Jay Narain

Date: 7/6/2023 12:09:00 PM

Romantic poem, Nice one.

Timothy Ray

Date: 7/6/2023 11:47:00 AM

absolutely a lascivious invitation to paradise awaiting....good one young lady...but then again I am more than partial to romance and your fan....loved it

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2023 7:52:00 PM

Thanks so much. It was probably my favorite of the ones I posted this week

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2023 11:14:00 AM

- Romantic poem, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/6/2023 1:29:00 AM

Well written Kyrielle. Composed with great style. And quite romantic though I think the lover is more concerned with the cherry win I prefer French red wine, the Bordeaux and the Cabernet being my favorites. None=the-les your poem is elegant and pleasing. Hugs xx

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2023 3:48:00 PM

thanks i have no idea what cherry wine tastes like but i know its red and sweet so i am sure id like it