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Imaginings

When the northern star opens her gauzed veil
On clouds’ ladder, winged pixies arise
Where magic glides like a lucent trail,
A parade I watch with angelic sighs.

Glossy dust bounces on cosmic array
To kindle thrills from a fancy dreamland
As elves gather a rhapsodic play
With choirs stylized by mystical wands.

Jiggling lithe toes beyond stellar frames,
More fays croon in my secret heaven
Till youthful imaginings proclaim;
I become Nyx of this orbit’s glen!



Nyx--Goddess of Night
Mystic Rose's Fantasy Contest
6/27/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:23 PM
stunning win
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 1:45 PM
big congratulations, Nette, on your dreamy win.
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June 28, 2015 at 5:07 PM
I do like watching the sky. We don't have that luxury so much these days with light pollution. It is fun to watch things happened behind the cloud curtain. Very imaginative and fun are you!
Anish Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Nice, dreamy verse here. Good luck in the contest1 Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
Gasun Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Hello, my very dear friend Nette. I didn't visit the winning list yet 'cuz I just came in. After replying your comment on my poem, I directly came here and this is really superb! I know it's a great winning piece so my warm congrats! So sorry for not being around this week cuz of flu. Hope you're doing well. Tcare always! Thanks a lot! Many hugs, Leonora
A  Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 12:22 AM
WOW, Nette, Congrats on the fantasy win...... SKAT
Lalion Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 1:08 PM
I was just about to say how effervescent your poem is, only to see it win 1st prize on the ramp. Well, congratulations and here's to more awards!
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 11:35 AM
- Beautiful image ..... posted today ...... and 1st place in the contest only after a few minutes !!! - Bravo !!!!! - Congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 7:55 AM
congrats on the win Nette, spellbinding write.
Sabre Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 6:42 AM
You wave your wand of wonders, and fantasia springs from a dreamy pen! This to me is an eloquent poem!
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