Black Eyed Susan Poet Dodoitsu

Imagined Ugliness, the Unseen Enemy

Backlit by the moon she stands,
Proud to anyone watching
While "I’m too fat,” flawed thoughts
Silently stalk her


9/20/11

Received 2nd place in "Doditsu Darkness" contest

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Zzzzz Zzzzz October 27, 2011 at 11:50 AM I don't follow the contest results, but I hear you got 2nd place with this fine write. Well done indeed! xoxo Robert.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2011 at 12:06 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Susan. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2011 at 12:09 AM I see you got second place. Awesome, Susan. I had not even seen this one. Were you describing me? haha.

Sara Kendrick September 23, 2011 at 2:20 PM Congrats on your win with this stunning work.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2011 at 5:05 PM Congrats Susan on super second place win my friend.. awesome poetry luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2011 at 4:32 AM Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Susan

John Smith September 21, 2011 at 12:12 AM "Too fat" is the new norm.

Audrey Haick September 20, 2011 at 8:36 PM Wow! One of the best I've seen Susan. Best wishes for the contest. Perfect imagery! Love, Annalise