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Imagined soul ascent, an egoic delusion, for when we are tested, we sink in the quicksand, finding ourselves bested. Imagined soul ascent, conceals hidden desire to become what we’re not, being yet stuporous, in grooves of habit caught. Imagined soul ascent, negates here now this-ness of consciousness status, waiting for divine grace, to heal our hiatus. Imagined soul ascent, as yearning of our heart, signals we’re yet in mind, insentient to bliss, to reality blind. 25-June-2022

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Date: 6/25/2022 9:05:00 AM
Fine arguments on life and there after.
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Date: 6/25/2022 3:40:00 AM
Seeker, the structure of this poem is simply stunning. You did a fantastic job with this difficult poetic style. Additionally, there are numerous exquisite thoughts surrounding the subject you have picked.
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Date: 6/25/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, Sotto :)

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