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For Caren Krutsinger who drives my imagination to crazy places :) 

ecstasy of piranhas, perhaps to dream the dream of falling S P L A T flying...i’m flying thereafter eaten by raptors well there’s that the big bang i’m the new world inhabited by Fraggles shake that off the dust bowl i think therefore i am sucked up by a hoover the anchor agitates the floor of the beautiful blue sea surreality is attached to me black eyes of a pea lodge in my eternity dressed in a green and purple Barnie suit my kids won’t even bury me afraid of i love you you love me 5/11/2020

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Date: 5/14/2020 1:40:00 AM
I am so excited and thrilled to read that you have dedicated this MARVELOUS wonderful whimsically beautiful missive to me! Wow! I am deeply honored my friend; and so glad I can be of even the most remote help in your imagination which I kind of doubt. Ha! You were already there long before you ever met the likes of me or Trixie. Trixie is nodding her head emphatically!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:21:00 AM
LOL! You are the leader of the pack, well Trixie, and I follow! You help me to catch the wind of wild abandon and follow through.
Date: 5/13/2020 7:28:00 PM
Enjoyed all the connections... good to just let it fly once in a while. It feels good to be Caren once in a while as well. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 7:49:00 PM
I know, right?! LOL
Date: 5/11/2020 11:02:00 PM
A wonderful verse, which I enjoyed very much, Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 5/11/2020 4:43:00 PM
A great way to go out, in a "green and purple Barnie suit", loved it Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2020 6:17:00 PM
LOL...my kids hated Barnie. Played it a lot when I had a daycare in my home.

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