Imagined Deaths

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For Caren Krutsinger who drives my imagination to crazy places :)

ecstasy of piranhas, perhaps
to dream the dream of falling
S P L A T
flying...i’m flying
thereafter eaten by raptors
well there’s that
the big bang
i’m the new world
inhabited by Fraggles
shake that off
the dust bowl
i think therefore i am sucked
up by a hoover
the anchor agitates the floor of the beautiful blue sea
surreality is attached to me
black eyes
of a pea lodge
in my eternity
dressed in a green and purple Barnie suit
my kids won’t even bury me
afraid of i love you you love me

5/11/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/14/2020 1:40:00 AM

I am so excited and thrilled to read that you have dedicated this MARVELOUS wonderful whimsically beautiful missive to me! Wow! I am deeply honored my friend; and so glad I can be of even the most remote help in your imagination which I kind of doubt. Ha! You were already there long before you ever met the likes of me or Trixie. Trixie is nodding her head emphatically!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:21:00 AM