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Words have failed me, often falling silent though they're shouted out within my heart. And spoken meekly, never violent, they've struggled with what to say from the start. I’ve rarely said “I love you”, though I do for that devalued phrase makes love sound cheap. And though I seldom voice my love for you my affections run impossibly deep. Thank you, for you making me all I am, whatever good you found, you magnified! And made me feel, I'm worth a tinker's damn, standing beside me, always on my side. Dying hurts when one soul splits into two yet I cannot be there to ease your pain. And it’s hard, for I know you're hurting too, my soul has passed on, yet yours must remain. I dare not imagine how I would feel if you died and rose to a higher plane. But I have faith, I believe God is real and He'll reunite our souls once again. (Quatrain) Dec. 24, 2018

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Date: 1/9/2019 3:33:00 PM
Lovely, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/9/2019 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/28/2018 9:22:00 PM
Emile, very well written with deep emotion . Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/29/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/28/2018 3:55:00 PM
It seems hard for some people to say, "I love you," and I guess that there are others who feel the phrase has lot its meaning through overuse. I like to believe the bond this couple shares will continue in the afterlife. Very nicely penned, Emile. Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/29/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/24/2018 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful Emile. I hope you have a happy and peaceful Christmas :)
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Date: 12/24/2018 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, and a Merry Christmas to you my friend, Emile.

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