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Imagine, After Forever

It is all the words lost, the swirling, the
missing dates and this slow evil poison filling me
and the darkness is creeping, creeping closer each day.
Give me your hands.  Do I know you?
It is the pain, the pain that endures . . . 
Now, flashes of beauty brightly spin and fade, oh
endless emptiness and lost words on my tongue.

And the wasting away of my soul, no more poetry . . .
For my safety I retreat-   I leave this world for silence
to the past, the past, the past, where
everything is pretty and happy.  Oh, the
reaching-   the endless reaching for words and names.

Failure, failure, don't disturb my dreamy dream, where
only I dwell, happy!  Now, give me my dolly !
Remember, oh remember our bleeding love lost, darlings
evermore in a magic land I dwell, where I am a beauty,
venturing and meandering, just a shadow of me . . . 
Ever and beyond, my darlings, adieu, adieu !  Please,
remember me after forever when this heart beats no more.

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December 14, 2017

Poetry/Acrostic/Imagine, After Forever
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9720-71-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


For the contest,  After Forever
sponsor, John Lawless

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Krampe Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:31 PM
Beautiful and sad, Constance - congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Sadness with a longing to be happy! Congrats Constance!
Daniel Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 6:16 AM
Wow! Constance, wonderful poetry..congratulations on your win:)
Tripp Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:10 AM
Real talent here with this amazing acrostic. Makes me want to try one! Your words here are chilling, the photo a tad creepy. Combined for a winner. Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:12 PM
Beautiful read. Congrats on your win. A FAVE for me. Thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:59 PM
Soft and sweetly dark like a lullaby Constance, if I had to name your signature style. :) just lovely. Congratulations on your win xomo!
Canerdy Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:44 PM
A hauntingly moving, lovely piece--CONGRATS, Constance. Janice
Lawless Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:46 PM
BW, this poem, reaching back into the after of forever seeps into the heart of the reader. Beautifully written, filled with the "imagery" of loss. A gently flowing Acrostic, well done. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Inman Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:29 PM
This is gorgeous BW. I didn't realize it was an acrostic until after I read it and looked at the form. Wonderful.
Babcock Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Absolutely amazing write on this poem. Such a gifted writer you are. love phyl
Swartz Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Wonderful! You wrote an amazing poem. Love your words and the imagery and the feeling throughout the poem.
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