Imagination

Imagination frees imprisoned souls
to soar among the stars on golden wings
or rest upon the moon as gods of night.

To fill yourselves with grandeur, close your eyes.
You're kings and queens to rule enchanted lands
where dragons, wizards, trolls, and knights abound.

Exploring seven seas from fathoms deep
to Neptune's keep, with walls Tahitian pearl.
A mermaid sings for sailors lonesome tunes.

The forest comes alive where fairies play
or shadow monsters loom in silence. Then...
Imagination brings you safely home.


Scansion:


i-MA-gi-NA-tion FREES im-PRI-soned-SOULS
to SOAR a-MONG the STARS on GOL-den WINGS
or REST up-ON the MOON as GODS of NIGHT.

to FILL your-SELVES with GRAN-duer, CLOSE your EYES.
you're KINGS and QUEENS to RULE en-CHAN-ted LANDS
where DRA-gons, WI-zards, TROLLS, and KNIGHTS a-BOUND.

ex-PLOR-ing SE-ven SEAS from FA-thoms DEEP
to NEP-tune's KEEP, with WALLS, ta-HI-tian PEARL.
a MER-maid SINGS for SAI-lors LONE-some TUNES.

the FOR-est COMES a-LIVE where FAI-ries PLAY
or SHA-dow MON-sters LOOM in SI-lence. THEN...
Im-MA-gi-NA-tion BRINGS you SA-fely HOME.


Written by Arlene Smith
July 20, 2024
Contest: For new poets: An exercise in Iambic Pentemeter
Sponsor: Roy Jerden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lawless Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Arlene, I love those "trips of imagination" No travel agents, baggage, or TSA wands. Good job on the contest, congrats on win.
A   Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations, in Roy's contest... Linda
Burkholder Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Arlene, I was completely captured by the strength of the first stanza of this poem which drew me in. You handled the structural challenge of this format with ease - making it look easy, which it is not. Congratulations on accomplishment and this win! Blessing, Diana
A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 6:26 AM
Wow an excellent write Arlene! Congrats on top win!
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 11:18 PM
Wow...outstanding win Arlene.... Hugs Tim
Mcintosh Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Congratulations on your top win. I enjoyed your poem. God bless you and happy writing.
Nance Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:58 PM
What a great form and great story, you topped the list with this beauty, well done!
Walker  Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:43 PM
Done well Arlene... A beautiful thing the imagination can be... Congrats! first place you take darling... Verlena
Callus Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:50 PM
Well done, Arlene! Your imagination has not let you down!! On the contrary, it has raised you to top place on the winners' list. Congratulations! // paul
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Fabulous write Arlene I didn't even attempt this form am inspired now! hugs Jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:02 PM
This is really nice. I think you got the deserved spot with your first place! Congratulations.
Jerden Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations, Arlene! You may remove the scansion, now, if you like. Cheers, Roy
Kendrick Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go with this test of writing skills..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 11:04 AM
Thank you so Mich, sweet Sara!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Vaso Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:15 PM
I loved this, and you know what came to mind right of from reading this? Nelson Mandela. I loved this one!!
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Wow! Thank you very much, Arthur, my friend. Hugs.. Arlene
Parker Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 7:10 PM
A beautiful poem that should do well, good luck my poetic friend
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Thank you dear Frederic. I appreciate your comments, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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