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Imagination

Imagination Peaceful soul in weakest hour of rest Fear in the beating heart pounding Crying soul looks for escape In tears of entrapment Screaming in darkness Search for release Sadness looms No voice Dream Written by: Debra Falgout Imagination contest by: Nette Onclaud June 13, 2012

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/4/2012 5:29:00 PM

Debra, you have an art for imagination. Beautiful piece and win as I see. I must make time to flip through more of your work. Hug n more hugs. Luv michael

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/16/2012 3:10:00 PM

congrats on your contest win; this is a well written nonet and perfectly encapsulates the picture :-)

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/16/2012 7:12:00 PM

Thanks Charlotte,,glad you loved it,,love debra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2012 11:35:00 AM

happy for you.. well-written!.. congrats on your win in my adventure, debra!) huggs!

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/16/2012 7:13:00 PM

Thanks to you nette for broadening my mind,,,i didn't know what a nonnet poem was till i was given this challenge,,,love debra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2012 3:32:00 PM

Terror in writing..Very descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/14/2012 10:31:00 PM

That picture seemed very scary to me,,so i figured trapped in a nightmare,,,Thanks,,debra

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Debra. Love, Carol

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/14/2012 10:32:00 PM

Thanks Carol,,these forms of poetry surely expands the mind,,but i love it,,,,love,debra

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/14/2012 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations Debra, well done xx

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/14/2012 10:34:00 PM

Thanks Mandy!!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/13/2012 9:23:00 PM

Not sure if this is a dream or nightmare, but the poem is great.

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/14/2012 10:38:00 PM

I wanted to make sure that certain descriptions were in the dream,,,so the descriptions were a nightmare,,and because of the nonnet,,,i had to end it as a dream,,,thanks,,debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2012 9:15:00 PM

LOL...I WAS JUST HERE.., congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2012 9:05:00 PM

Debra, imagination runs wild... xox~pd

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/13/2012 5:45:00 AM

best wishes,nice write Debra

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/13/2012 3:05:00 PM

Thanks Richard,,,thought i would give nonnet poem a try,,,practice in progress,,lol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2012 5:24:00 AM

A lovely poem for the contest Debra, winning luck to you. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Debra Falgout
Date: 6/13/2012 5:33:00 AM

Thanks Anne,,this one was a challenge for me,,always good to keep mind busy,,,have a peaceful day,,,love debra