Imagination

Imagination


Peaceful soul in weakest hour of rest
Fear in the beating heart pounding
Crying soul looks for escape
In tears of entrapment
Screaming in darkness
Search for release
Sadness looms
No voice
Dream


Written by:  Debra Falgout
Imagination contest by:  Nette Onclaud
June 13, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Falotico Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Debra, you have an art for imagination. Beautiful piece and win as I see. I must make time to flip through more of your work. Hug n more hugs. Luv michael
Puddifoot Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 3:10 PM
congrats on your contest win; this is a well written nonet and perfectly encapsulates the picture :-)
Falgout Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Thanks Charlotte,,glad you loved it,,love debra
Onclaud Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 11:35 AM
happy for you.. well-written!.. congrats on your win in my adventure, debra!) huggs!
Falgout Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Thanks to you nette for broadening my mind,,,i didn't know what a nonnet poem was till i was given this challenge,,,love debra
Kendrick Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 3:32 PM
Terror in writing..Very descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
Falgout Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 10:31 PM
That picture seemed very scary to me,,so i figured trapped in a nightmare,,,Thanks,,debra
Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Debra. Love, Carol
Falgout Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 10:32 PM
Thanks Carol,,these forms of poetry surely expands the mind,,but i love it,,,,love,debra
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations Debra, well done xx
Falgout Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 10:34 PM
Thanks Mandy!!!
Grisetti Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Not sure if this is a dream or nightmare, but the poem is great.
Falgout Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 10:38 PM
I wanted to make sure that certain descriptions were in the dream,,,so the descriptions were a nightmare,,and because of the nonnet,,,i had to end it as a dream,,,thanks,,debra
A   Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 9:15 PM
LOL...I WAS JUST HERE.., congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD
A   Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Debra, imagination runs wild... xox~pd
Palmer Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:45 AM
best wishes,nice write Debra
Falgout Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Thanks Richard,,,thought i would give nonnet poem a try,,,practice in progress,,lol
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:24 AM
A lovely poem for the contest Debra, winning luck to you. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Falgout Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:33 AM
Thanks Anne,,this one was a challenge for me,,always good to keep mind busy,,,have a peaceful day,,,love debra
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