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Written - 24th June 2025

 

 

 

Imagination

Imagination can fly one away To those places where one’s fantasy’s stray Hitching a lift upon a passing cloud Seeing the world anew, from upside down. Imagine being on a sunny beach When the possibilities out of reach Soaking up the sun, swimming in the sea Wearing only trunks or a bikini. Envisage the summer love never ceased Flowers in one’s hair, a signal of peace Dancing in the streets, a hippie’s delight In San Francisco, from morn to night. Imagine how wonderful life could be If all folk on earth lived in unity Across the world all people holding hands Happy as lambs and babies in their prams. Picture a smile upon everyone’s face Imagine all folk blessed with pure divine grace. * * *
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Proxenos Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 11:53 PM
My dear, dear friend, that would be a Utopia, fortunately our poetic minds allow us to think how great that sounds. Perfectly you have described a happy, content Planet Earth but Reality is grimmer however, theft, murder power and starvation. I WISH YOUR POEM COULD COME TRUE! HUGS GALORE, Jennifer.
Velasco Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 11:09 PM
The sunny beach and carefree love evoke a perfect, dreamy escape, while the closing vision of universal harmony feels truly uplifting. A lovely reminder of the power of imagination to inspire better days.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Thank you Rowena, your words are encouraging, pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 9:41 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Imagination" write. What a great ending... "Good Luck" We both did this one. I was off the computer for a week and now way behind. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away.......
Edmonds  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Thank you Paula, I’m pleased you enjoyed the read. Read your poem it’s lovely… Beryl (I can see now that I didn’t read the instructions properly, should only have written ten lines.)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Sorry I have not written much these months. Your poem is brilliant and full of imagination. Wishing you the best of luck. Hugs.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 6:59 PM
Thank you Victor, I’m so pleased you liked this poem, your words mean a lot. I won’t forget you poet pal… Hugs, Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Don't forget me. I get lost quickly enough.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:39 PM
lovely poem...reminds me a bit of John Lennon's song, "Imagine." I love the positive energy in your poem. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 6:42 PM
Sara, I thought of John Lennon’s song too, as I was writing this poem for the contest. Thank you for the comments and best wishes… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Dear Beryl, I felt myself drifting on those “passing clouds,” caught between laughter and longing for all the places fantasy dares to go. I felt I was viewing out a window thrown open where the golden light of a beach, the swirl of ‘60s freedom, the deepest wish for a world linked hand-in-hand. As John Lennon said, "Imagine all the people..." Summer Blessings, My Dear Beryl, Daniel I love how you let Imagination be both the engine and the wings.
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July 24, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Thank you dear Daniel for your uplifting review, I’m pleased the poem took you on the imaginary view. Summer blessings returned to you… Beryl
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