Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Imagination

A child's imagination will flow
with energy wild and carefree
Innocence only they can know
Holding visions they can see

As adults our gift of imagination
We lose that magical ability
No longer have the fascination 
It is lost when we gain maturity

A purity makes it feasible
Every child holds illumination
Making it much more achievable 
What is needed for imagination

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Gordon Mcconnell September 18, 2019 at 1:13 PM Such a lovely imaginative piece Brenda, it takes one back to pre school age when things was so simple and imaginative. So filled with great imagery and insightful thought. Have a great day, poetry hugs, Gordon Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 2:07 PM Thank you Gordon your visits are so welcomed!;)

Sandra Adams September 18, 2019 at 11:05 AM to live in a child's imagination would be a wild ride...some of the things they come up with totally amazes me.... though i agree with Rick, a poet's imagination is pretty wild at times too.... good penning my friend :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 2:06 PM Thank you Sandy! I know my grandkids amaze me everyday with some thing they come up with!;)

Richard Lamoureux September 18, 2019 at 10:31 AM I think Poets have discovered the fountain of youth. It seems your imagination is very much intact. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 2:05 PM Lol thank Rick! Yea as poets I guess ours lives a lot longer!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 18, 2019 at 10:02 AM What a lovely poem this is... I love it. God bless you always. Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 10:14 AM Regina thank you so much!;)

Arturo Michael September 18, 2019 at 8:44 AM I like this...I think I've suppressed mines a little too long...it never really leaves... Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 8:55 AM Lol they say men never grow up but I know you guys do! You May never lose that ability to have fun though! Thank you Arturo!;)

Chris Green September 18, 2019 at 8:41 AM That was wonderful Brenda and a very good reason why I never wanted to grow up, I always wanted to keep the child-like imagination that I had but time does eventually win out. I also didn't want to grow up because didn't want to pay taxes, that didn't work out either. : ) Seriously, this was beautiful, playful and such fun to read. Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 8:54 AM LMAO! Well you can be forever Peter Pan Chris! But your poetry is not child childlike! You are forever young at heart chris!;) Thank you!;)