Imaginary Lives

Oceans revealing,
Mer-maids, mer-men, mer-children,
Underwater world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Water always brings beautiful. and imaginary creations. great write. -Always Lynette
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January 20, 2010 at 7:00 PM
Beautiful imaginary world you penned. Thank you for your comments. I used to be a ballerina for 10 years of my childhood. Love, Iolanda
Haick Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Great Haiku, Marty! I must thank you for your kind comments on my poems! Truly appreciated. Peace and love, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 1:12 PM
The great inventions of today so that we all can turn on the television and see any thing that is filmed all over the world as the ocean depths,etc. is so wonderful. Great way of expressing the idea. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 19, 2010 at 12:38 PM
You have me smiling with this one. My daughter loved The Little Mermaid when she was little. Your poem brings back fond memories for me. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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