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Images of a Mind

Images of a mind

A mirage.
A portage

between there
and where

one may find
essence of mind.

The subconscious,
the conscious

may not enter.
Doors do hinder.

B. J. “A ” 2
May 5th 2015

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Bernard F. Asuncion Date: 11/24/2016 7:37:00 PM one may find essence of mind. full of thoughts.... Congrats for being selected for the day... Login to Reply William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 11/27/2016 4:28:00 PM Thank you Bernard F. Asuncion, for taking the time to read and comment on my stuff !!! Much appreciated !!! How true “ one may find essence of mind. full of thoughts.... ” Bernard, awake, asleep, in a state of reverie, knocked unconscious, in a state of near death or in death itself !!!, the energy, the essence of mind just keeps on travelling, as our thoughts permeate every moment on this plane, in this universe (( our bodies )) or out there in the ether of this or other universes . Bill .

Constance La France Date: 11/24/2016 3:48:00 PM William, great poem full of pondering thoughts and congratulations on having your poem selected as a Featured Poem this week. Login to Reply William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 11/24/2016 4:31:00 PM Wm. J. Atfield Jr. bja2mgmenter@gmail.com Thursday, November 24th, 2016 at 2:30 PM Thank you Broken Wings, for reading my stuff and for your lovely comments !!! Does your nom de plume come from the title of a song ???, by that same name or from the book ??? B. J. “A ” 2 (( Bill . ))

Kp Nunez Date: 5/13/2015 1:14:00 PM Surprised to see I haven't left a comment for this. The one I made did not go through? Nevertheless, I 'd like to say once again that this is an apt presentation of what a "mirage" is. Brief, complete and concise. No need for analogy, the conscious having had no time to dwell. Interesting, sire. Hugs! :-) Kim Login to Reply William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 5/13/2015 1:58:00 PM Certainly not my usual style of creation “ this is an apt presentation of what a "mirage" is. Brief, complete and concise. No need for analogy, the conscious having had no time to dwell. ” I see that you have added more Gems Kim, and love “ I AM AN EAGLE ” a great psychological peace, especially if this is auto biographical !!!, for so few metamorphose and become something more than what life and life’s experiences have created or taught . Could this “ FACES OF STORM ” be reflection of what ripped through your area ??? “ Interesting, sire. ”, thank you my Dear, for thinking so . Back at you “ Hugs! :-) ” my Dear . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . ) William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 5/13/2015 1:58:00 PM Good morning my Dear : That is quite alright Kim, “ Surprised to see I haven't left a comment for this. ” for you now have and I am sorry that your first attempt failed. As always, nice to get a reply from you ( my only commenter these days . ) Kim, who seems to find something about my stuff worthy of comment. Thank You !!!