Images I Recall

Nature in all her glorious splendor 
Serves as reminder in loves fall
For only you bequeath this tremor
In depictions of images I recall 

Effortlessly you breath life in me
In seasons young and guileless
A fragrant rush of healing breeze
A pastel sunset in reverent silence

Your masculine beauty staggers in part
Like the rapid beat of hummingbirds wings
Causing incalculable pulses in my heart
A timeless consciousness of a dream

Your a sanctuary of waters
In forms numerous in theme
Like raindrops bathe the pauper
Or my feet dangling in a stream

You walk with me in rainbows shadow 
Forming hope through foaming falls
You entertain me with puddles shallow
And secure me in the surfers transparent walls

Your kisses like water cascading 
Over my lonely emerald lands 
Your strength like waves fiercely bracing
Stillness on morning lake the moment you hold my hand

Your an offering like a summer rain
My covering like winters snow
My sustaining element of life
The ceasing of the tears you know
 
Your my future journey my waterway
The current that carries me home
Your the deep pool where our children play
Our bond powerful like water smoothing river stones

A thousand deaths of life I'd suffer
If of you my world were to be deprived 
Like the earth of water left uncovered
For your waters are the celebration of my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/3/2013 4:40:00 PM
OKAY! Rebecca and I both agree... this one needs to go in my favourites file! BEAUTIFUL my sweet sweet lady! Love galore Miss Sarai What a beautiful poem... you write like an angel! XOXOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/4/2013 5:31:00 AM
Good morning Santa Baby, it was actually your soup mail that compelled me to write this one... So honored you placed it in those closest to your heart. Hugs and loves forever my dear friend XOXOX
Date: 12/3/2013 5:07:00 AM
Ahhh!! Great romantic work..It is well written with good rhyme and flow..I enjoyed reading this one today...I am glad that I found it ...Sara
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/4/2013 5:26:00 AM
Hello Sara, so nice of you to visit. I will be sure to drop in to visit you as well. Thank you for your kind thoughts. Hugs
Date: 12/3/2013 3:20:00 AM
- Sarai, this is truly a beautiful poem .... glad I came to visit you today! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/4/2013 5:24:00 AM
Greetings Anne Lise, thanks for dropping in. Hugs for your day XOXO
Date: 12/2/2013 9:28:00 AM
What a melting of the heart!!! Such vulnerable declaration of the soul! What a beautiful writing.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/3/2013 2:38:00 AM
Love melts even the hardest of hearts, it is the most vulnerable aspect of life and the human soul. You Sir Drake know all too well that what flows from our pen is the overflowing within. As always, your comments I cherish ... Hugs
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