Image

Swans crowd the lake scattering their white feathers like lost love songs; like my love song, lost upon the downstream drift.

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Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 9/15/2011 4:48:00 PM

beautiful one my friend...i really really love the way you analyzed my poem...it looks like you understood it more than i did or do...not one my favorite poems,but you made it look that it had a lot of potentials.thank my friend and i would love to see more and more of your poems..you are a really fine poet...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2011 7:02:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Rosanne. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Rosanne Sbrigata
Date: 9/2/2011 11:43:00 AM

Thank you very much for welcoming me to PoetrySoup.com. I appreciate your warm and kind words. It is true that this poem of mine, "Image", is somewhat sad and melancholy, but not all of my poems are like this! As a matter of fact, I write alot of poems with optimistic endings!...The title was originally conceived in French,(for sound and flow), but it is also OK in English. The French and English words are spelled the same!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 10:17:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 3:41:00 PM

a lovely write Roseanne so full of deep emotion with a parallel to the swans so beautiful.. luv can be this way ..luv..