I'M Yours

A maze of doors, our labyrinth cores- Just one more kiss and I am yours! And sated thoughts will come and pour From my Mind in mirth no more

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/21/2014 8:45:00 AM

Chan This is creative and unique. A cute little love poem with feeling and depth. Nice job my friend Thanks for the awesome comment on my My Foot Your Back poem. Huggies

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/21/2014 10:54:00 AM

I appreciate it, Sweet Pea :)

Cindy Lu

Date: 8/27/2013 7:48:00 PM

Nice writing. I enjoyed this read! Thanks! Cindy

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/28/2013 5:50:00 AM

Thank you very much, Cindy, for stopping by and leaving me encouraging compliments :)