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I'm Wishing

I’m wishing again to be part of your life, Your lover, your wife. I’m wishing unbidden words could be stricken And writ unwritten. I’m wishing the days I spent in denial Hadn’t been final. I’m wishing you’d stayed so my words you could hear, I’m sorry, my dear. My regret is rife With sorrow and strife, I’m wishing again to be part of your life. 11/9/2018

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Date: 12/3/2018 3:44:00 PM
such an emotional poem Deb, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 12/3/2018 12:12:00 PM
Hello Deb! Congratulations on placing in my half eleven contest with this very poignant poem. I hope it’s not autobiographical. I really love the second stanza in particular. Very well written.
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Date: 12/3/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nina, for both your gracious comments and for placing my poem among your winners. Almost autobiographical, but we managed to have the “writ unwritten”. I remember well the sorrow.
Date: 12/3/2018 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations, Deb. A powerful,poignant message.
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy. I appreciate your words and am grateful for your visit.
Date: 11/18/2018 11:00:00 AM
Tenderly romantic poem that touches the heart and soul dear, Deb!
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Date: 11/17/2018 10:39:00 AM
Deb, your poem is so emotional and full of deep longing for a love lost, I really like it, well done ~
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Date: 11/9/2018 4:45:00 PM
A daily delicate gem, Deb. Beautifully done.
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Date: 11/9/2018 1:42:00 PM
WOW! Just great--excellent write, Deb.
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