Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

I'M Waltzing - Edited

I’m
waltzing
and 
waltzing
and gliding
with ease.
I’m 
so glad
I tried this.
It is a breeze.
With a one
two three
one  
two three
Darling, won’t
you please
waltz
now with
me?

March 22, 2023
for Emile Pinet's Waltz Wave Poetry Contest
Syllable pattern: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1

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Beata Agustin April 3, 2023 at 6:30 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... serenely delighting! God bless you.

Unseeking Seeker April 2, 2023 at 6:18 AM Wow! You make it look so easy, Andrea! Warmest congratulations on your win

David Mohn April 1, 2023 at 4:56 PM love the flow and the rhyme Andrea...congratulations :)

Daniel Turner April 1, 2023 at 4:40 PM Congratulations Andrea:)

Akanksha Ayantika April 1, 2023 at 11:06 AM Delightfully light hearted, congratulations on your win Andrea!!

Linda Alice Fowler April 1, 2023 at 10:53 AM This is a dance lesson I can follow! Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)

Paul Callus April 1, 2023 at 10:35 AM I love your take on this waltz wave form, Andrea. I'd gladly take up your offer, but do watch your toes :) Congratulations on your fine win. // paul

Emile Pinet April 1, 2023 at 10:14 AM Congratulations Andrea! Your whimsical poem "I'm Waltzing", has earned you a distinguished place in my “wave" poetry contest. Though I was strict, your poem easily earned its place on the winners list my friend, Emile.

Joseph May March 23, 2023 at 6:07 AM Your poem glides with grace Andrea, best wishes in the contest, hugs

Joanna Daniel March 23, 2023 at 1:42 AM Wow! Perfect for the 'waltz' wave, Andrea, I did on 'waves':)

Bj Legros Kelley March 22, 2023 at 8:32 PM Fun Andrea, a fun and breezy poem! :)

Daniel Turner March 22, 2023 at 2:55 PM You'd have to wear steel toed shoes but I think I could count to three. A fun read, Andrea. Hoping you are well.

Elizabeth Mccann March 22, 2023 at 2:22 PM Love a waltz and your poem put me right back inside it! Elizabeth

Suzanne Delaney March 22, 2023 at 1:59 PM yes…..very definitely dancey. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2023 at 1:21 PM Cute!

Ilene Bauer March 22, 2023 at 12:58 PM your poem feels just like a waltz, andrea! perfect!