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I'm trying best I can

I may look cool but
I'm peddling as fast as I can
just trying to keep up



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 5:50 PM
I can relate...sometimes I feel as if I'm merely treading water. :-)
Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 7:28 PM
Going nowhere fast ~ I know the feeling well, Sara
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