'i'M Too Darn Old For the Cold'

I am but a man who is so cold,
with a bad cough from a cold that’s bold.
Bronchitis cold sickness,
from this cold I’m listless-
Guess for nude cold skiing, I’m too old!


9-9-6-6-9 syllable count
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Same Word Winter Limerick Poetry Contest
Charles Messina
January 11, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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January 18, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Laura, fantastic ,very well written Limerick with great imagery. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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January 15, 2019 at 7:48 AM
I've never skied in the nude lol, in fact I never skied in my life lol. Great limerick Lu. Congratulations on your win. :) Charlie
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