I'M Tired!

i'm tired! boy, do i need rest. every night sit look at the ceiling. to sleep i try my best! why is it so hard? my eyes are wide open. i can't close them shut!! and when i finally fall to sleep, my alarm sounds for me to wake! ugh!

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Ali Matheny

Date: 11/7/2008 3:11:00 PM

Dude that happens to me all the time and it sucks. . . I never sleep as is cause I think I have insomnia or something... I mean I get sooooo freakin tired but then I can never get to sleep at night. . . So whatcha doin?

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/4/2008 8:30:00 AM

Oh I can relate to that! Same thing with me. Cant sleep most of the times and then when finally do......the alarm goes on. And I'm so damn lazy...I sleep again even if I can't. This has disturbed me a lot:) Lets see if we can find any solution. Nicely penned. Love, Chitra