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It's the end of our beautiful dream The thrill is gone, for that reason... I'm through loving you. The nightingale that sings in my heart for you has flown away, therefore... I'm through loving you. There's no longer warmth in your smile; no sparks in your eyes; I'm afraid... I'm through loving you. The magic in your touch has worn off; your... embrace is now as cold as winter snow, so... I'm through loving you. You've worn out your welcome; you've been... locked out of my heart for good. Sorry but... I'm through loving you. I'm through loving you. I repeat, I'm through loving you! But my heart can lie to itself. Premiere IV - Open Poetry Contest Sponsored by rob carmack Date written and submitted: 02/01/2020 Also submitted for... Strand Select B ,Any Form ,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 02/02/2020

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Date: 2/15/2020 6:22:00 PM
I just love this example of the form you are having us write. And I really like that you used that same last line almost all the way throughout. Congrats for the third place you got with this one, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/15/2020 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Date: 2/4/2020 4:28:00 AM
Edward congrats on your win!;)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/4/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda:-)
Date: 2/1/2020 7:43:00 PM
Well done! So true the ending, for many.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:-)

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