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I'M the Sun

Like the sun above the Earth, I will be always around, Can you feel my worth? Because I am forever bound. My body is strong as is my mind, I can put up a fight, Even if I'm blind. I might fade from white to gray, Maybe black on my worst days. But I will always shine, With or without my spine. My words are my armor, My pen is my sword, Just listen to me, it'll be your reward.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/6/2010 4:16:00 PM
Great poem.Enjoyable to read.I love the begining.Love,jamecia
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:27:00 PM
=D Awesome!!! Great poem Sara.I love the last stanza.
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:18:00 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:32:00 PM
Lovely sentiments in your words and a very creative write which I have so enjoyed.. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:20:00 PM
lovely dedication, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:02:00 PM
well done..TAH
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:56:00 AM
Awesome promise conveyed with your words, enjoyed Wilma
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:53:00 AM
What a terrific dedication and so endearing. Love, Susan
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