Andrea Dietrich Poet Pantoum

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I'M the Eagle Owl -Revised

Note to sponsor: (just noticed one word was "off" in a repeated line)

My orange eyes are blazing. Better scram!
Fast and dangerous, I’m the eagle owl.
My wing span is six feet; how grand I am!
Here I come; here I come – the owl most “fowl!”

Fast and dangerous, I’m the eagle owl.
With my sharp talons out, I come for you.
Here I come; here I come – the owl most “fowl.”
Too late you’ve heard my call: ooh-hu; ooh-hu!

With my sharp talons out, I come for you.
My wing span is six feet; how grand I am!
Too late you’ve heard my call: ooh-hu; ooh-hu!
My orange eyes are blazing. Better scram!

Gif #1 chosen
May 7, 2020 for Eve Roper's Pantoum Rhyme - Personification Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper May 9, 2020 at 10:41 PM Congratulations on your win, Andrea , in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. Great job with the theme you decided to choose. I have picked this photo 3 different times in the past to write about, it just fascinates me. Thank you for your participating in the contest. Hugs Eve

John Watt May 9, 2020 at 6:01 PM Dropping by again to wish you congratulations on your win, my friend!

Timothy Hicks May 7, 2020 at 9:51 PM It is quite intense ... like the owl. You know I don't think I paid much attention to the eye color of an owl until now (very odd considering it's my favorite color). Best of luck in the contest, Andrea ...

Darlene De Beaulieu May 7, 2020 at 5:37 PM Hello Andrea. owls hunt at night. They have very good eyes. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my fiend.

Mystic Rose Rose May 7, 2020 at 4:21 PM Ah, you picked such a majestic bird to write about, winning wishes dear heart.xo

John Watt May 7, 2020 at 4:11 PM I didn't have you figured as such a predator! I learn something new every time I read your writings, haha! Fun pun on the owl most fowl. Great job and GL in the contest, friend ~ John

Jack Horne May 7, 2020 at 2:26 PM very descriptive - kind of scary to see this coming at you, for sure, LOL

Tom Cunningham May 7, 2020 at 2:15 PM Well written Andrea, not my favourite form. Good luck Tom

Vijay Pandit May 7, 2020 at 2:14 PM Very dynamic in sights and sounds of reality in the photo. Well done Andrea. A winning poem you wrote.

Krish Radhakrishna May 7, 2020 at 2:02 PM Very clever, like a little drama! I like the way you have made that attack sound real ominous for the prey! Andrea, all the best in the contest.9

John Watt May 7, 2020 at 1:34 PM Very well done pantoum, Andrea. Looks like you won't be going hungry anytime soon! GL in the contest...

Rico Leffanta May 7, 2020 at 1:13 PM I love it when they snatch a rat! Aloha! Rico