Get Your Premium Membership

I'M Thankful

I’M THANKFUL I CRIED THE NIGHT YOU LEFT ME THEN I CRIED AND CRIED ALL DAY I CRIED AND THEN I ASK MYSELF HOW COULD YOU TREAT ME THIS WAY WHAT DID I DO TO DESREVE THIS NOTHING THAT I COULD THINK OFF I ONLY WANTD TO SHARE MY LIFE WITH YOU AND GIVE YOU ALL MY LOVE I THOUGHT THAT I WOULD NEVER, EVER LOVE ANYONE AGAIN THEN I REALIZED THAT JESUS DIED FOR ME TO SAVE ME FROM MY SINS AND NOW THAT, THIS HAS ENDED AND I HAVE BEEN RESTORED I’VE LEARNED THAT IT ONLY TAKES GOD’S LOVE GRACE AND MERCY FOR ME TO BE REBORN SO I’M VERY THANKFUL BECAUSE I’VE FOUND THAT ONE TRUE LOVE THE LOVE THAT ONLY GOD CAN GIVE THAT’S SENT FROM HEAVEN ABOVE SO IF YOU WANT TO HAVE THAT LOVE THE KIND ONLY HE CAN GIVE TURN TO JOHN 3: 16 AND IN HIM YOU CAN LIVE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/20/2024 2:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/15/2017 1:02:00 PM
This an excellent poem, and very biblical too. As I am also a Christian, it is very refreshing to find others who share my beliefs, as indeed, it is only through Christ's sacrifice on Calvary, and our faith and trust in him that we can find eternal life. There is one thing you might do, and that is in the first line of the second verse, 'deserve' is misspelled. Your use of all capital letters is a bit startling, but certainly seizes one's attention.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2016 12:13:00 AM
Laverne,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2015 8:10:00 AM
Hope to see you post a new poem soon. SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2015 8:05:00 AM
Laverne, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things