I'm Taking Steps For A New Life

I'm on fire with this life.
I like the fiery flames,
I like to let go through myself,
To experience, to feel emotions,
I love to warm up people's life.
I want to believe my own feelings.
Rather than rely on logic often,
All my destiny steps are taken away,
When I felt my whole body sense,
Came brave right decision for victory.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Hello Hugo, Did you succeed in your goal to take steps for your new life? If so how did you do it? Love you here. /Darlene/ You must be busy doing something. Well do n ot over due. it. Love you here. /Darlene/
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Life in the truest sense is not all comes with logic or reasoning. Perhaps the heart is concealed but the feeling is rewarding. Emotional people often seen lonely for they used to contemplate and reflect things inside. Faith is synonymous with emotion as I see it. Unbelievable yet possible. Victory is a laughing cry in the end. So silly opinion I have here. Emotionally silly. I thank you for your emotional concern, Darlene. I been sick for months now and still recuperating. I have no taste to think to write. If things work out right, I'll be returning to writing. Thank you, Darlene, in this regard. I've been missing you much./Hugo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Hello Hugo, I have not seen any new poetry from yu. i hope all is well with you and your family. hot and humid here. Take care. love you here. /Darlene/
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