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I'm Sure Feeling Good

I’m Sure Feeling Good

Like rosy, red ripe strawberries,
I’m pulsating with cosmic joy.
Like a lark, I sing, it’s so good to be alive,
I’m a dolphin diving into the golden glow. 
I’m flirting with wispy white clouds…
did they just wink at me?
Even they know I’m feeling real good.

Swinging high in a rainbow sky,
just floating along on a silky summer breeze.
Playing with my friend gravity, watch me cruise…
there’s nothing that can bring me down!
Hello new day! Move aside, Mr. Sunshine, 
your flash has nothing over my flash…
I’m taking over - this solar system is mine!




Inspired by Nina Simone’s song “Feeling Good.”

Free verse
05-05-2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/23/2018 3:10:00 PM
My dear friend Pandita, your poem is absolutely buoyant in emotion with vivid imagery and uplifting poetic lines.. it just breaths positive vibes and your last three lines are just stunning! An exhilarating write that sure leaves me feeling good!! Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 2/23/2018 3:39:00 PM
My dear friend, Susan, your wonderful comments and compliments always make me happy! Thank you so very much for your continued support! Best wishes and hugs, Pandita
Date: 10/27/2017 10:20:00 AM
Hello Pandita, this poem you wrote is so beautifully written. I am making this poem my favourite.It is so nice to meet you.
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Date: 1/2/2018 9:35:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I did not receive an alert that you had left me a comment. Please accept my apology for not responding earlier. Thank you so much my friend for stopping by and leaving such a nice compliment! I wish you a most happy, healthy, and prosperous 2018! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 6/10/2017 2:12:00 PM
Ooooh I love this happy one! It makes me want to shout, sing, soak up some of that energy and sunshine! Beautifully done! Love and hugs. Kika
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/12/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Kika for stopping by and leaving such a nice compliment! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/31/2017 11:36:00 PM
Hi Pandita, I don't know how I missed this positive and uplifing poem. Girl let me tell you, I loved everything about this piece from beginning until the end. I love the song as well and you complimented it very well. I felt good while reading it and I still feel good. Excellent job my friend. This would have been an easy seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/1/2017 11:00:00 AM
Hi Alexis, it is so great to receive your lovely compliments! Yes, this a real "feel good" piece! I was happy composing it and delighted it made you feel good as well! Thank you, thank you! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/15/2017 6:16:00 PM
I love this. It's the song I was inspired by as well. Great job, Pandita.
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Date: 5/25/2017 1:59:00 PM
My dear Andie, your wonderful comments and compliments always make me happy! Thank you so very much for your continued support! Best wishes always, your friend, Pandita
Date: 5/15/2017 4:41:00 PM
This is a good poem I like it.
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Date: 5/15/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Keith for stopping by and leaving such a nice compliment! Hope you are enjoying the day! Pandita
Date: 5/11/2017 11:54:00 AM
You soar above the clouds in this uplifting write Pandita... Very nicely penned
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Date: 5/15/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, my dear Joseph for your special compliments! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 5/7/2017 3:25:00 PM
Hi Pandita, it is wonderful to see a new write from you on the soup. It is an excellent, feel good write. You read and just feel at peace with the world. Keep singing the song Pandita. This is excellent free verse. This one has such wonderful content. It has to be a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/8/2017 11:08:00 AM
My dear Mike, your uplifting comments and compliments always make me happy! Thank you so very much for your continued support and high score! Hugs and best wishes always, your friend, Pandita
Date: 5/7/2017 2:10:00 PM
Hi Pandita. It's so nice to see you back on here - and you've brought us a gift in the form of this wonderful poem!! Fabulous imagery and a really contagious "feel-good" vibe... I know that it's made *me* feel better! Thank you for sharing! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:51:00 AM
Hi John, it's good to be back especially with encouragement from dear friends like you! Thank you for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/6/2017 11:42:00 AM
This has cheered me up no end. Lovely write Pandita.
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Date: 5/6/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you very much for the sweet compliment. I am so delighted to spread some cheer! Just continue to let the sun shine in, dear Elizabeth! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/5/2017 3:13:00 PM
This was happy and uplifting and so gorgeous Pandita. I the readers don't feel good after reading this amazing piece, then there is something definitely wrong with them. I feel good now. :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/6/2017 12:09:00 PM
My dear friend, thank you so much for stopping by. Your visit helps to make me feel so good!!! :-) Have a great weekend with lots of sunshine! Pandita