I'M Still Here

I'm Still Here .... 

I wish you would stop hiding
And share with me your pain. 
You know I'm always here 
And will comfort you in this rain. 

I might not understand everything
But I'm here to do my part
Help you climb this mountain 
From the very start. 

Its hurts me every day
To know that you're so down. 
The only reason I'm where I am 
Is because you help me to keep strong. 

You've guided me all my life
and seen me at my worst. 
You've been my pillar of strength,
every time those tears would burst. 

I really miss the old you. 
My Protector, my Guiding Light. 
The one who always understands me
And makes everything alright. 

So this is me reminding you 
The words that you use to say
That this is not the end
And everything will be okay. 

It maybe a little stormy right now
But soon the sun will shine right thru. 
The dark clouds will break away 
And you can always start anew. 

So this is my promise I make to you 
And reminding you I'm still here. 
Let me help you climb this uphill path
And help diminish all your fears...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/17/2013 5:41:00 AM
wow , i know you are still here with us nice poem
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Date: 5/13/2013 3:52:00 AM
Enduring relationships are built by being there for the one who has been there for us when it was needed - even though it appears that our presence do not make a big difference in their lives. Well-constructed poem, Sasha, and thank you for you comments on my poems... David
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/13/2013 4:20:00 AM
Yes that is true indeed. Thank You for the wonderful Comments :)
Date: 5/13/2013 1:28:00 AM
- Sasha .... a really good poem .... a little sad - I wish that your day will be full of sunshine and joy - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/13/2013 1:30:00 AM
Many Thanks Anne.. *hugs* i wish the same for you :) mwah
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