Ailsa Wright Poet Rhyme

Im sorry you see

I'm sorry, You see

To my three beautiful boys
I'm sorry, you see
Mum's not quite been the same lately 
But I promise I'm getting better 
I owe it to both you and me 

To my family and friends 
I'm sorry, you see
If I've ignored calls and texts 
I know it's only because you care for me
But some days it's been a struggle just to function and think lately 

To anyone who relates to this
 I'm sorry, you see
But I hope you understand even the strongest struggle sometimes 
Be it anyone,  even you or me

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Candide Diderot June 14, 2024 at 8:45 AM "But I hope you understand even the strongest struggle sometimes". Sending "LOVE", what could be stronger amunition than Love. You are much stronger than you know. And you are not alone, even when you think you are.... Ailsa Wright June 22, 2024 at 11:42 AM What lovely kind words to receive, thank you so much, truly appreciated. I hope you are well ?? Candide Diderot June 14, 2024 at 8:45 AM 'Mother is the name for God in the lips and hearts of little children'

David Smith June 6, 2024 at 12:17 PM You have my respect, firstly for such a brave write and secondly for the passion that produced a poem that is hopeful and does not dwell on negativity but shows strength and maturity in the writing of it, The poem is well constructed and flows together nicely. Will definitely read more of your work. You have earned a place on poetry soup for as long as you want. Hopefully you now can enjoy the feeling of sunshine on your shoulders most days. Best regards David in NZ (70 years life experience) Ailsa Wright June 9, 2024 at 11:12 AM Wow what wonderful, positive feedback to receive, truly appreciated. Comments such as these is what keeps me writing so i thank you so much. I hope you are well ??

Cat Drinkle March 25, 2024 at 6:13 PM Great poem, I feel it, and your heart Ailsa Wright March 27, 2024 at 2:15 PM Thank you so much, the lovely comments received, like yours, are filling my heart, so thank you x

Trish Fern March 15, 2024 at 6:32 PM Same Ailsa Wright March 17, 2024 at 8:51 PM I do hope your ok sending you strength and hope for better days x

Robert Sidwell March 10, 2024 at 1:08 PM Sincere, touching, excellently articulated, relevant and relatable. Congratulations on the win! Ailsa Wright March 10, 2024 at 3:44 PM Wow, Thank you so much for your fantastic feedback, i cant even describe how good it has made me feel, truly appreciated

Ink Empress March 10, 2024 at 11:58 AM Dear ailsa, i feel the sincerity of your heartfelt words woven here in such a poignant manner. Life is not always butterflies and rainbows and it definitely isnt easy, and especially somedays like youv said it can be harder and self isolation the only answer, as everything gets overwhelming. I hope and pray for better days. You are stronger than you know.Happy mothers day. Sending you light today and always. Congratulations on your win. Ailsa Wright March 10, 2024 at 3:41 PM Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I hope you are well, kind words like yours are definitely helping and making such a difference, thank you again, truly appreciated

Silent One March 10, 2024 at 8:38 AM It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. This is heartbreaking and remind me of what my sister went through.. I am so sorry for what you are going through and I am sure your boys will understand.. I hope you are back to your happy self soon.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Ailsa Wright March 10, 2024 at 11:45 AM Wow i am absolutely delighted with my place in the contest. I can not thank you enough for the boost this has given me and also for your kind words. I hope you are well and also your sister too, many thanks again

Beata Agustin February 23, 2024 at 5:58 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Ailsa Wright February 23, 2024 at 1:51 PM Thank you so much x