I'm Sorry I Asked
What do I suggest?
I suggest a baboon
on a boring afternoon,
or...a stale banana!
I feel
a banana peel
and a red bandana
on a wide savana
has a certain appeal.
In, a chimpanzee can stride,
brimming, understandably, with pride.
The chimp and peel can interact,
if the scene is handled with finesse and tact.
I think that would be best.
That's what I suggest.
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