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I have never found a sight That's ever treated me so right A place where friends come easily And ever thought can be set free Without hate or hurtfulness These are things I do not miss That other sites seem to share No one on them wants to care So I searched for days on end Looking for a writer friend To help keep my dreams alive Showing me how I can thrive Through the good reviews, not bad This kind of faith I've never had Till the miracle of Soup Became my new family group Teaching me I can believe In my talents and succeed Many new friends found their way Into my heart where they will stay To become the family I need most With each and every single post Stronger bonds are forming now I do not even know how My life managed to exist Till a precious sight like this My world was conquered for the better Every word and every letter From comments, hellos, and love I'm surrounded with a hug Made from hands of every color I would not want any other Group of caring and kind people Helping me to really feel The proudness that's coming out Cause that's what writing is about Many new friends found their way Into my heart where they will stay To become the family I need most With each and every single post Stronger bonds are forming now I do not even know how My life managed to exist Till a precious sight like this poemprophet AKA Robin Davis 6/02/2014

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Date: 6/6/2014 1:09:00 AM
hey, so I see there was an original here. I will have to see the newer one again and see how much you changed it. I remember I really loved the other one's message. Way to take a poem and revise it!
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Date: 6/3/2014 5:39:00 AM
Hello Robin. You pretty much captured the way a lot of us feel. What a blessing it is to be part of this family. Hearts can soar when given love and positive reinforcement. Some of the best poetry I've ever read is right hear in the Soup. Your poem is put together very well and flows warmly into the soul. Thanks. Robert
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Date: 6/3/2014 1:31:00 AM
The poem has all the contest requires, Good luck, robin
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Date: 6/3/2014 12:34:00 AM
I'm glad you found a place where you feel loved and appreciated. You've expressed your joy and exuberance so well in this write.
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Date: 6/2/2014 10:36:00 PM
very well chosen words.. .really fit for this wonderful world of Poetrysoup!!! .. yeahhh boy... I love it here... and you're one of those lovely people I knew ... thanks for sharing it w/ us!!! ... great job!!!! ^_^
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