I'M Out of Here {footle}

if you 
    feel blue

           can't forgive
                 just snive

                         the one
                             your son

                                        you love
                                             because

                                                   you won't
                                                         and don't

                                                              love 'em 
                                                                   leave 'em

                                                                            for long
                                                                                   he's gone



Please let your son's and daughters know
they are loved and wanted no matter what

This is my entry for Jim Fish's Contest
Love And Forgiveness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Beautiful and yes quite creative and cleverly done. Good luck Kathy! Love, Shar
Kelly Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Katherine , very clever and sensitive presentation . Best of luck in the contest ...
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