Im Not Depressed Life Just Sucks Sometimes...

sometimes life can knock you down
and tear your heart to pieces
but when i look in to your eyes 
its love my soul releases

you held my hand through thick and thin'
you made my heart anew
and when im lonley in my room
i try to think of you ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nipz Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 7:45 AM
but i dont want to stop talking to you
Nipz Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 5:24 AM
mrs. drees says hello she says come back!!! :(
Loving Iii Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 4:06 PM
this is so simple and sweet. i'll take this over a long letter any day. John H loving III
Nipz Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 10:20 AM
i honestly jst started cring just now!!!! i miss you soooooo much!!!!!
Moreno Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Impressive Catia, nice work...Raul
Poe Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 2:02 PM
loving the feeling
Nipz Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 5:40 AM
hi cati.....
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:40 AM
Impeccable flow and rhyming! The contrast between sadness and joy is well expressed... BRAVO Catia! Best wishes, Keith
Shango Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 7:43 AM
We all need a someone like that when the day is beside itself. Better days are promised to us, however, keep the faith and stay in love.
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