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I'M Not a Rat

Feeling as a rat I went to the doc for clue. He gave pretty pills Now great and sound as a rock. Will cats know I'm not a rat?

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/3/2020 10:14:00 PM

I don't think you are a rat Rats are nasty creatures You don't resemble a rat You don't have ratty features We all feel like rats at times It's another catch Cats put this into our minds So we become easier for them to Snatch... Thank you for your thought- provoking poem

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/3/2020 10:59:00 PM

Wow.. You create a poem in the comment.. Thank you..

Alkas Poetry

Date: 2/12/2020 4:44:00 AM

Only if you act like rat ! but i they do not know... lol, maybe a human rat ! salute alkas

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/12/2020 5:36:00 AM

lol... That is the problem.. I don't know whether I'm cured or not.. hahaha...Thank you Alkas..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/11/2020 11:28:00 PM

Humorous--with serious undertones, I think. Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/11/2020 11:36:00 PM

I think you understood the poem very well.. Or it may be my inability to make it visible.. Thank you for your support and comment..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/11/2020 10:55:00 PM

Cute idea there! Can only speak for myself, but this cat knows! Love this tanka! Ciao, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/11/2020 11:00:00 PM

Don't ever bring your cat near me dear.. lol..

James Horn

Date: 2/11/2020 12:37:00 PM

Went to VMI for a year where they have brother rats. Pat Boone was in the movie.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/11/2020 9:21:00 PM

Brother rats!!..lol..

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2020 9:49:00 AM

Cute write, there are times I do feel like a rat and karma is trying to tell me something. I enjoyed reading this one this morning to cheer me up. Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/11/2020 11:48:00 AM

Thank you Eve for your time and wonderful comment..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/11/2020 3:13:00 AM

Mmm Dont think Id risk it. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/11/2020 3:24:00 AM

lol... Thank you for your visit Tom..

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2020 11:22:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/10/2020 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Line for your time and support.. Have a great day..