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I'M Losing It

I’m losing it This life in a prism drains Every place I turn A new face to show I’m losing it The sense of who I am I spin in circles Being who they need me to be I’m losing it Remembering that once I was true That I showed you I’m losing it What I was Even though I knew You would see a monster But you were the same To my surprise I’m losing it You treated me As a kind companion Not a circus spectacle Not as I deserved, even As I dreamed, perhaps And I’m losing it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/7/2010 4:08:00 PM
very strong write here my friend
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Date: 2/15/2010 10:54:00 AM
wow i am really shocked to be your first comment on this one, especially since it is so relatable. i loved it and i think we all feel this way, well i know i do! i just loved this poem so keep writing em! =)jo
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