I'M Just Thinking

I wrote so, so many poems, and to me it seems 
nothing I wrote has got puttin in,"I'm just 
thinking". Is it how I address myself, the way
that I speak my mind, Is it my age "I was just 
thinking". Do you think that i don't know
what i'm talking about, what I say when i talk,
"I'm just thinking". Well tell me is my poetry
not friendly enough, funny enough "I'm just 
thinking". People do alot of thinking but never
open the mouth. Will you start thinking when
people start turning down what you think is right.
You'll never know by just thinking. Don't take 
this the wrong way. Like I'm not tryin 
to make a point just remember "I'm just 
thinking".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 24, 2009 at 7:31 AM
Love this. I like the point the poem is making and how you wrote it. I think its very effective.
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