Gray Squirrel Poet Free verse

I'm Just Slow

I'm Just Slow

Absolute Truth
Takes F'ing
FOREVER
To figure out.
 
Out. Out. Out.

Yes, and that needs some 
Cleverer
Adjective above.

Insistent Bottlenecks.

Hang on...
I'll get it.

-Gray Squirrel

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Gray Squirrel March 10, 2024 at 12:54 PM I'm not sure, I kinda' like the discomfort this has more of... but the new edited version is closer to the original thought... Gray Squirrel March 10, 2024 at 12:56 PM LOL, like anybody cares.