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I'm Just Slow

I'm Just Slow Absolute Truth Takes F'ing FOREVER To figure out. Out. Out. Out. Yes, and that needs some Cleverer Adjective above. Insistent Bottlenecks. Hang on... I'll get it. -Gray Squirrel

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Date: 3/10/2024 12:54:00 PM
I'm not sure, I kinda' like the discomfort this has more of... but the new edited version is closer to the original thought...
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Daniel Stein-Freer
Date: 3/10/2024 12:56:00 PM
LOL, like anybody cares.

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