I'M In Love With Those Eyes

…And one day I realize
I’m in love with those eyes
those deep eyes like oceans
to which I want to ask million questions
I tortured myself not to see you eye to eye
I wasn’t falling for you was just a little lie
I tried reading it,
had a soulful meaning, every blink got me burn
what a great lesson to learn
maybe for the first time
I need no music to dance
your eyes are enough just look at me a glance
these aren’t heaven, these aren’t hell
these are my small world
with see, sand beaches you and I as well
and at night,
I close my eyes, I see those eyes
I open my eyes, I miss those eyes
day by day I’m getting hypnotized
and then I realize
I am in love with those eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/30/2024 10:11:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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Date: 3/3/2021 10:50:00 AM
Cool vibe; I like it -JT
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:49:00 PM
Hi Jasleen You have painted the thirsty eyes in a true color.......really enjoyed your beautiful writing I close my eyes, I see those eyes I open my eyes, I miss those eyes day by day I’m getting hypnotized and then I realize I am in love with those eyes
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:17:00 AM
The eyes reveal so much!
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Date: 8/31/2017 3:33:00 AM
realy ! we just cant express the whole
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