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i'm in love with those eyes

…And one day I realize I’m in love with those eyes those deep eyes like oceans to which I want to ask million questions I tortured myself not to see you eye to eye I wasn’t falling for you was just a little lie I tried reading it, had a soulful meaning, every blink got me burn what a great lesson to learn maybe for the first time I need no music to dance your eyes are enough just look at me a glance these aren’t heaven, these aren’t hell these are my small world with see, sand beaches you and I as well and at night, I close my eyes, I see those eyes I open my eyes, I miss those eyes day by day I’m getting hypnotized and then I realize I am in love with those eyes

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Date: 2/10/2018 11:49:00 PM
Hi Jasleen You have painted the thirsty eyes in a true color.......really enjoyed your beautiful writing I close my eyes, I see those eyes I open my eyes, I miss those eyes day by day I’m getting hypnotized and then I realize I am in love with those eyes
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:17:00 AM
The eyes reveal so much!
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Date: 8/31/2017 3:33:00 AM
realy ! we just cant express the whole