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I'M Finished With You

THIS IS THE TRADITIONAL CINQUAIN WAY OF WRITING. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hateful You are to me Your abuse is blazing And I'm tired of your hell raising Please stop! Spiteful Are the cruel words That you inflict on me Why won't you ever let me be? Please quit! Worthless I am to you You love to tell me that While in the middle of combat Stop it! I'm gone And no longer Will I let you hurt me With a whole-hearted guarantee Goodbye! Dawn D. Kilby Copyright ©2008 Dawn D. Kilby

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Deneen White

Date: 10/27/2008 4:07:00 PM

sometimes it is hard to walk away, but if someone can not love and truly respect you, then they don't deserve you, but you have to decide that enough is enough, this is truly a write that can identify with, thanks for all of your comments, hope things get better for you, take care D-nyce

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/26/2008 5:13:00 AM

Wow! This piece is quite expressive and actually drew the line in the sand. There are times when actions such as this have to take place. One must stand up for what is right. I like your thoughts on the subject. There is a song by the Beetles which states "We can work it out!" Great job! ~Joseph