Dana-Leigh Nowajewski Poet Prose Poetry

I'M Fine

JUST ONE MORE cut i'll be "fine" If I cut deep enough i'll loose my "LIFE"... Wishful thinking.... I don't want to cry tonight....On the outsde I seem  "HAPPY" But you know better than that so  just say .... Goodbye....Don't let them in ... They..They might think you're "OKAY"Lie and lie again ... you might make a friend.  "I'M FINE , I'M OKAY "  I won't make it through today.... Crash down on my knees break down and cry .. just sit their and stare and wonder why  "I'M FINE "  "ONE LAST CUT ILL MAKE IT MY LAST ,I'M FINE "  thell never ask maybe if i cut a vain ill die insane "hope.."  full and thinking  i cry at night because im sad... not because the face you see if truely a painting that the  inside brush draws to  "HIDE"  i know better than to think they care but dont say goodbye not yet if you never read your story theyll never know it was their they will leave thinking your  "FINE:  covering a lie with a lie with a lie to make a friend who can see through each lie " I'M FINE I'LL BE OKAY "  , but really will i make it through today fall down to the floor breack down and cry wile people just sit and stare and wonder why "I'LL NEVER TRUELY BE FINE " 

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Moon Flower May 14, 2016 at 7:19 AM That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Dana. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 12, 2016 at 11:15 AM Dana, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei May 12, 2016 at 9:27 AM Dana, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Skat A May 11, 2016 at 10:48 PM Dana, So Sorry about your lOSS,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Dana-Leigh Nowajewski May 12, 2016 at 6:07 AM Hello SKAT thank you