I'M Fine

I say I'm fine, That I won't give up, But I do. I try to mask it But it still shows. The feelings I hold inside me, I will keep bottled up. To make it seem like I'm okay. No one can see me Wanting to give up, Wanting to break down and cry. I don't know how much more I can take. I have to be strong And pull through It's hard though, But I'll be fine.

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Skat A

Date: 6/25/2016 10:51:00 PM

BEING HONEST, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/20/2014 12:45:00 PM

Being Honest, this is such a deep powerful piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2014 11:11:00 AM

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Dimestore Shoes

Date: 9/19/2014 1:36:00 AM

i think we all see each other, just dont say anything. I like your title and whole premise, makes me feel like im fine too, kinda