I'M Fine

When I'm asked If I'm OK I smile and say, I'm fine!. If they could see Inside my heart. They'd know I was only lying.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2024 9:58:00 PM

Wow. Simple yet so deep.

John Read
Date: 11/19/2024 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Andrea nice hearing from you. Xx

Daisy Meadows

Date: 10/23/2023 12:48:00 AM

Many of us don't always show how we are feeling. A good poem. Well done.

John Read
Date: 11/19/2024 7:37:00 AM

That's true Daisy God bless you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2023 7:33:00 AM

So sad that we cannot be open to our own worries. I'm sure many will help.

John Read
Date: 11/19/2024 7:36:00 AM

We all were a mask when facing the world outside, thank you for your visit and comment Victor.

Arastu Goyal

Date: 9/10/2023 1:44:00 AM

I like this, it expresses the TRUTH. Nice rhyming, I enjoyed it :-)

John Read
Date: 9/10/2023 3:08:00 AM

Thank you Arastu for your time and comment.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/8/2023 3:13:00 AM

John, some have the gift to know, others don't care, some just walk away other take the time, sending you the blessings you need and deserve :)

John Read
Date: 9/8/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Rose for your visit and comment.xx

Bill Baker

Date: 9/6/2023 5:06:00 PM

Nice Rhyme poem, John. Often true of most of us. Have a great week! Bill

John Read
Date: 9/7/2023 5:23:00 AM

Cheers Bill wishing you the same.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/5/2023 2:09:00 PM

I feel for you brother John, keep soldiering on… Sis Belle

John Read
Date: 9/6/2023 5:57:00 AM

Thank you sister Beryl, will do my best.