I'M Fine

When I'm asked If I'm OK
I smile and say,
I'm fine!.

If they could see
Inside my heart.
They'd know I was only lying.

feelingsrhyme

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Andrea Dietrich

November 18, 2024 at 9:58 PM

Wow. Simple yet so deep.

John Read

November 19, 2024 at 7:37 AM

Thank you Andrea nice hearing from you. Xx

Daisy Meadows

October 23, 2023 at 12:48 AM

Many of us don't always show how we are feeling. A good poem. Well done.

John Read

November 19, 2024 at 7:37 AM

That's true Daisy God bless you.

Victor Buhagiar

September 21, 2023 at 7:33 AM

So sad that we cannot be open to our own worries. I'm sure many will help.

John Read

November 19, 2024 at 7:36 AM

We all were a mask when facing the world outside, thank you for your visit and comment Victor.

Arastu Goyal

September 10, 2023 at 1:44 AM

I like this, it expresses the TRUTH. Nice rhyming, I enjoyed it :-)

John Read

September 10, 2023 at 3:08 AM

Thank you Arastu for your time and comment.

Mystic Rose Rose

September 8, 2023 at 3:13 AM

John, some have the gift to know, others don't care, some just walk away other take the time, sending you the blessings you need and deserve :)

John Read

September 8, 2023 at 5:08 AM

Thank you Rose for your visit and comment.xx

Bill Baker

September 6, 2023 at 5:06 PM

Nice Rhyme poem, John. Often true of most of us. Have a great week! Bill

John Read

September 7, 2023 at 5:23 AM

Cheers Bill wishing you the same.

Beryl Edmonds

September 5, 2023 at 2:09 PM

I feel for you brother John, keep soldiering on… Sis Belle

John Read

September 6, 2023 at 5:57 AM

Thank you sister Beryl, will do my best.

I'M Fine

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