I'M Falling Apart

**...Here We Go Again With The Story Of My Life...**
**...It's Lil Devistating And I Ain't Got My Rights...**
**...Moving It On Towards The Pain...**
**...I'hve Learned I've Nothing To Gain...**
**...It Made Me Sick,It Made Me Weak...**
**...And I'm Falling Apart Loosing My Grip...**
**...The Way Is Too Long To Get Along...**
**...As We Know Lives Moves On...**
**...The Scary Part Is Still Away...**
**...Cox It's The Pain That Won't Get Away...**
**...Even Though If "DEATH"Was On My Way...**
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January 3, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Sad
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November 18, 2011 at 5:57 PM
There is so much to live for. Life can be a bit uncomfortable at times but there's always a door of opportunities open for us. The things that bother us are lessons that make us stronger women and men. Search the world and you will find some whose troubles you can't fathom. Write about things other than your problems. There are babies dying from cancer, abuse, etc. One day things will get better. Don't you go down, keep you head above the waters. Be strong and have a firm meditation. Love, Earle
Farouk Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 1:55 PM
i guess ur ryt earle ..i gonna try my best to write stuff based on cancer ,abuse etc etc....n im hoping to get developed my skills in wrting poetry ...and thnkkx alot earle for saying me.....
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November 18, 2011 at 6:46 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Rukiya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Farouk Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Thnkxx alot carol thatx really nice of you.. yeh i hve read their poems and they are really amazing ...and my good wishes are with you ..,Rukiya
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