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Im Down Here Lord

I am just a grain of sand on this world of endless beaches. One small voice in the multitude of cries and shouts of this world clawing towards God. My faith promises that God hears the voices of his people. I know God will call me to Heaven one day. look down on me Lord oh can you hear my whimper over cries and shouts i am down here lord in this lost sea of voices i know you hear me My Faith Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina Riddle 7/6/20

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Date: 7/18/2020 4:31:00 AM
Your strong faith is evident in your verse Timothy, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 7/17/2020 10:50:00 PM
Bravo, a beautiful heartfelt piece. Well penned, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/17/2020 11:12:00 PM
thank you LINE!!!!
Date: 7/11/2020 1:43:00 PM
Very nice! The inner voice travels farther than we know! All the best in the contes!!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/12/2020 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Krish!
Date: 7/8/2020 10:00:00 PM
Excellent Timothy. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/8/2020 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Judy!
Date: 7/6/2020 9:50:00 PM
'in this lost sea of voices' -- very delicately put... But your voice, steady as it goes, will be heard!! Keep the Faith, Gershon
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/6/2020 10:44:00 PM
thank you Gershon
Date: 7/6/2020 8:55:00 PM
Your voice is well heard in this poem.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/6/2020 10:45:00 PM
Well that is a nice thing to say! Thank you

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