Timothy Mcguire Poet Haibun

Im Down Here Lord

I am just a grain of sand on this world of endless beaches. One small voice in the multitude of cries and shouts of this world clawing towards God. My faith promises that God hears the voices of his people. I know God will call me to Heaven one day. 

look down on me Lord
oh can you hear my whimper
over cries and shouts 

i am down here lord
in this lost sea of voices
i know you hear me

My Faith Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina Riddle
7/6/20

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Tom Cunningham July 18, 2020 at 4:31 AM Your strong faith is evident in your verse Timothy, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend Tom

Line Gauthier July 17, 2020 at 10:50 PM Bravo, a beautiful heartfelt piece. Well penned, Timothy. Timothy Mcguire July 17, 2020 at 11:12 PM thank you LINE!!!!

Krish Radhakrishna July 11, 2020 at 1:43 PM Very nice! The inner voice travels farther than we know! All the best in the contes!! Timothy Mcguire July 12, 2020 at 3:50 PM Thanks Krish!

Judy Ball July 8, 2020 at 10:00 PM Excellent Timothy. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Timothy Mcguire July 8, 2020 at 10:13 PM Thank you so much Judy!

Gershon Wolf July 6, 2020 at 9:50 PM 'in this lost sea of voices' -- very delicately put... But your voice, steady as it goes, will be heard!! Keep the Faith, Gershon Timothy Mcguire July 6, 2020 at 10:44 PM thank you Gershon

Caren Krutsinger July 6, 2020 at 8:55 PM Your voice is well heard in this poem. Timothy Mcguire July 6, 2020 at 10:45 PM Well that is a nice thing to say! Thank you