I'M Doing

I'm doing"

I'm doing to much
I'm giving all of me 
And with you,I feel there's no guarantee (no guarantee)
I went in, with my intentions
Know I meant well
But tour intentions were like a boat about to sail 
So what do I do, what do I say
Could we rewind and press play (play)
Is it to late, I'm afraid it is 
I gave it my all 
Now it's time to chill

(Chorus)
Sometimes when it's over (over)
It's just that(that)
Not basing it off opinions 
Solely on facts (facts)
I've done to much
Feels like this is just a crutch (crutch)
No more bending or trying it out
When you get tired
You'll find a way out

(Verse2)
We had some good times (times)
Yes we did (we did)
We were planning for the future, a life, a house , a kid
In the twinkle of an eye 
Things changed 
Our titles didn't even remain(remain)
Things started to switch 
Feel like we we're left in a ditch
But then I came to a conclusion
With all this confusion
In my head that it was time,
To move on ,and be strong
I know it sucks, but good luck


Chorus)
Sometimes when it's over (over)
It's just that(that)
Not basing it off opinions 
Solely on facts (facts)
I've done to much
Feels like this is just a crutch (crutch)
No more bending or trying it out
When you get tired
You'll find a way out

(Hook)
It was good 
While it lasted 
But we weren't on the same page 
So you can have it
It was good 
While it lasted 
But we weren't on the same page 
So you can have it 

Chorus)
Sometimes when it's over (over)
It's just that(that)
Not basing it off opinions 
Solely on facts (facts)
I've done to much
Feels like this is just a crutch (crutch)
No more bending or trying it out
When you get tired
You'll find a way out

Repeat until chorus fades 
Written by: Concetta Hardnett
9/17/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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